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boogieshoes) wrote2013-02-25 06:29 am
boogieshoes) wrote2013-02-25 06:29 am
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a sort-of haiku
bleak browning desert
bitter mountain bones
a beautiful, brutal thing.
You can see i've inverted the last two lines to form a 5-5-7, instead of a 5-7-5 syllable poem. it better fit the imagery in my head. whenever i think of the landscape around Las Cruces, the phrase 'a beautiful, brutal thing' now comes to mind.
http://www.pbase.com/tconelly/image/131278017
-bs
bitter mountain bones
a beautiful, brutal thing.
You can see i've inverted the last two lines to form a 5-5-7, instead of a 5-7-5 syllable poem. it better fit the imagery in my head. whenever i think of the landscape around Las Cruces, the phrase 'a beautiful, brutal thing' now comes to mind.
http://www.pbase.com/tconelly/image/131278017
-bs