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bleak browning desert
bitter mountain bones
a beautiful, brutal thing.

You can see i've inverted the last two lines to form a 5-5-7, instead of a 5-7-5 syllable poem.  it better fit the imagery in my head.  whenever i think of the landscape around Las Cruces, the phrase 'a beautiful, brutal thing' now comes to mind.

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